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You did a great job in shading and transferring the shading as it spins. It's a bit grid-like, but I still like it, especially how it looks with the white outline.
The animation is very smooth too, great job on that. I honestly thought it'd be a lot choppier, because it's a hard object to rotate, but it doesn't seem jumpy or choppy at all.
I also like the little white pixels on the bottom that lift it, they were a nice touch.
And now onto the negatives.
I have never in my life seen a milk box that would be that skinny. It is very disproportional that way.
The lines next to the edges seem very out of places as well, and it makes it harder to make out.
It seems like the top part should be at a bit more of an angle too, and I don't see on the too-skinny part the indent that slope would've made on the package. Watch that.
All together, it's a great job, just a few bugs here and there.
It's addicting to watch for whatever reason, to be quite honest. xD Great animation, as always.